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Old 02-01-2012, 05:24 PM   #11
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I like the second one better, and as a PP said, the word dies just throws me. I like maybe "after her son passes" or something along those lines.

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Old 02-01-2012, 05:46 PM   #12
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I actually thought the first one makes me want to read the book more than the second one.
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Old 02-01-2012, 05:52 PM   #13
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I actually thought the first one makes me want to read the book more than the second one.
I agree. I also like the idea of writing the book first, unless you need this to submit early to a publisher. Then it doesn't matter, because they'll likely change it anyway.
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Bump with a third option.
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I like the first option the best. It makes me want to buy and read right now. But I do agree that you can add to it or edit it a you get the book written.
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I just want to read the book! I don't even need a synopsis.

Fwiw, I like the second one. The last one 'Loss Mamas' makes me say Los mamas in a spanish accent.
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I also like the first option the best, it catches my curiosity and want to get my hands on this book to find out all about what happens in the story.
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The last one 'Loss Mamas' makes me say Los mamas in a spanish accent.
Someone else told me the same thing, lol.
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I like the first one too
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I like the first one
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